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river path a seasons dance

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river path a seasons dance

    


              
                chilling breeze of swift Autumn leaves
                    
                through a misty toned Lavender path

                 Feeling closer to Heaven and Earth

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Shanity, , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love

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    Date: 10/9/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I love writing in the Am' fresh with a strong cup od coffee, usually fresh !!
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Lovely poem--- I'm curious about your capitalization, though..especially lavender.

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    Date: 10/6/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Interesting you found that , I have a picture of a river path and It looks lavender ! Being my Favorite color , one of them , thank-you !
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:13:00 PM
    Excellent, Yvette. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

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    Date: 10/4/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you My sweet friend Ralph , as I have said , if I could spend all day reading yours and others ..work is calling ;(
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:29:00 AM
    gorgeous haiku, the image unfolds beautifully...congrats on your win :)

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    Date: 10/3/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you My Beautiful friend , I can see you in all that beauty , walking down the path :)
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 9:41:00 PM
    YVETTE, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/3/2013 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh My ! Just noted 2nd ! Thank-you Linda , I am really complimented you see my poem a winner , for you all are so amazing ! smiling all day to work , Congratulations to everyone , Craig Cornish , the others ..I want to read so bad !
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    Date: 10/3/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Absolutely I will , I fi could stay on this site all day , I would ! Thank-you I love you guys !
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 3:59:00 PM
    THAT LAVENDER PATH SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL

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    Date: 9/22/2013 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am too many syllables. 8-9-9 wrong ..
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    Date: 9/22/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Liam , my 1st attempt at Haiku , and really expanding my thoughts with how one could only write in this style.
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Lovely imagery....evoked sweet feelings. Great write, Yvette...Hugs! Lovely avatar, by the way! :)

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    Date: 9/20/2013 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , Your is angelic ~ learning all different forms , I can see how one may be addicted to this Haiku style. Love To you ! Yvette
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:43:00 AM
    - Beautiful haiku, Yvette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 9/20/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you one of my Fav poets ! You have beautiful haiku poems written .