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Standing Room Only

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Standing Room Only

In crowded spaces, falling down:
Toward the sky into the ground,
And always landing "out-of-bounds"
As I lie awake on sleeping sounds

No room to dwell in Heaven's Hell,
No lies confessed, nor Truths to tell
The Demon's region, and Poets in legion-
Oh! My words, forever quelled!

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Chan This is an interesting and deep write. Makes the reader think about what is being said in these words. Nice job Thanks for the protective comment in my Others Misery poem. I appreciate the care and love. Right back at ya. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

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    Date: 12/21/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much appreciated, Sweet Pea :)
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 10:52:00 AM
    Has a Poe feeling to it--love the flow!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/11/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Craig, and much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:03:00 AM
    This is a wow for me to. Great write....applause! : )

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/20/2013 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A humbling review; many thanks, my friend :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 2:05:00 PM
    wooow...you truly have a beautiful way of pouring your thoughts out...wonderful piece of work...

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/20/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate the compliments, Fancy; thank you so very much :)