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Crazy Clay

Bindu Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Crazy Clay

Is it sweet destiny that I am in your hands?
Moulded to your desire on bracing fire
I wake up to lazy, latent earth trysts
As your potent fingers tease me to life

I arouse to a man’s enigma, sensuous as earth
Revel in caresses that melt my brown life
Thrill to heady moments riding high
As passion waltzes her way between us

Does your woman know you in this obsessive state?
In this intimacy that riots through you and me
Perfecting union in those feverish hours
Creation at her sultry, rapturous best…

I am earth and clay most of my life
Sired by Gaia when the gods were playing
You were moulded from me and breathed alive
Destiny turns a full circle now, I smile…


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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:38:00 AM

    I lack words to express how amazing this piece is. If you never wrote another poem this in and of itself would be a worthy legacy. Magnificent! Straight to my favorites.7777777777!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have also added you to my favorite poets list.
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:19:00 AM

    wow, this is really great reading!!! You are a talent, lady!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:34:00 PM

    What a beautiful and well penned poem Love is a beautiful art form that takes some a lifetime to finish, you have made it into a poem! Beautiful! Check out some of my poems! I hope you enjoy them! xoxo hugs and kisses all around!! :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:29:00 PM

    you have crafted a beautiful poem, love how this one ends as well...great write! :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 2:04:00 PM

    - With your pen you have painted a beautiful picture Bindu ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 1:08:00 PM

    I have to like this circle of life. We are all part of something strange and wonderful. We can perceive and enjoy so much, but often do not reflect on what it is we have or where we come from. It's nice to know that you can give thanks and pay homage to the gods. I think that is something special in this day when so many think they are the cat's meow.

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:57:00 PM

    I really like this passionate poem. Good job. Btw, my name isn't Morgan even though it is a nice name. You had me confused with Danesh Morgan

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:22:00 AM

    You write with a gifted pen......metaphorically wonderful.....this is sensual, and exciting poetry.......another winning poem!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:59:00 AM

    Just beautiful, I say. Particularly I loved the line "Creation at her sultry, rapturous best…". Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:37:00 AM

    You are a naturalist with your poetry well said my friend, enjoyed your verse today and always, peace I render, xxx