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When I Close My Eyes

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When I Close My Eyes

How I long for you beloved, 
That lustful gaze in your eyes
The way your hands like silk ties
Wrap themselves around my thighs...

Your soft warm lips
Upon My breasts
That trace of smouldering heat
Along my spine...

Hips swaying to and fro
Gazing at the paling moonlight
Our bodies blissfully entwined
And there, in the midst of ecstasy
Echoing through space and time
Are memories of you ...
In me, still so alive

When distance denies
And I can't touch your beautiful face
I close my eyes in delirious state
And it's in those secret, endearing moments
I realize why my love for you never dies...

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  1. Date: 12/17/2013 3:49:00 PM

    - Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me this year, Maddie - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:26:00 PM

    very romantic and moving poem

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 2/21/2014 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ;)
  1. Date: 11/16/2013 11:23:00 PM

    Madeline, wow.. Now this sure holds more than secret longing moments. A beautiful love stored in the back of the mind. It's amazing how one can leave the penetrating passion needing behind...that drives the mind wild, i would agree... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:48:00 AM

    Enjoyed stopping by reading this lovely piece of yours !! This poem expresses true love ! Love the way you have combined the words and made a lovely poetry ! .....Saanvi

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:08:00 PM

    You return the love I gave.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:11:00 AM

    - Thank you, Madelin ... this is music to my ears .... beautiful & sweet from your heart. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 10/14/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Anne Lise `Maddie
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:56:00 AM

    Hi Madelin, A very romantic and sensual write..I liked this one.. Ken

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 9/20/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ken, always appreciate kind words the positive feedback~Maddie
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 5:13:00 PM

    Ecstasy!

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 9/19/2013 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ecstasy is right my friend Love does that to you Thank you~Maddie
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:44:00 PM

    What a beautiful and powerful poem! I love it, great lines, well penned poem! Madelin! :) xoxo

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 9/18/2013 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Cris thank God for a sound memory and vivid imagery cause when your loving someone at a painful distance it's all you got :)