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Undressing Autumn

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Undressing Autumn

The wind gently touched the colored leaves
Shaking them ever so gently and watched
As they glided gently downward to the ground
Soft and colorful not yet crisp from the
ever changing season's cold
Soon the trees will be barren 
The green dress of summer changed
to autumn's splendid colorful suit
The wind smiled for it will have fun
undressing and blowing autumn's leaves.

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:07:00 AM
    Phyllis, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:56:00 PM
    This is very nice Phyllis ;}

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:52:00 PM
    I liked this very much. I also love to see the naked trees. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 5:50:00 PM
    so true Phyl, I hope you are fine and had a great summer and now a fine Fall. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:03:00 AM
    how this enchants me so, phyl... your autumnal grace just flows.. so lovely!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:14:00 AM
    PHyllis, thanks for seeing so many of my poems today. I sure wish you had lots of new ones for me to see. I need to spend the wee morning hours doing lesson plans. But wanted to tell you what a great friend you are. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 4:29:00 PM
    love this imaginative write, Phyll. Hope you are feeling well and having a great weekend x

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:16:00 PM
    soon your weather will be ours as your northern winds blow. our trees still enjoy showers. but every now and then there is a chill.

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:23:00 AM
    very pretty personification, my friend. It's always a delight coming here and seeing you have read my poems and better when I see you have up a new post. Now you have to do Gails' contest on season's dance. I bet you can do a great one.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:04:00 PM
    - Phyllis, thanks for the reminder :)) .... I am still "summer Turkey" ..... But, I know that autumn is waiting for me at home in Norway - Always nice to read what you write - Well done. - All the best to you my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 12:21:00 AM
    Nice personification of autumn, many sees it but few like you can pen it, Phyllis