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Away from Turmoil to Coil

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Away from Turmoil to Coil

Hear on the beach to the waves cascading,
Slapping and tossing of the sand pebbles,
Creating the sounds of swishing, and swashing 
hissing, rustling sounds of the wind circles.

People running, strolling, sunning in rows
The sun is about to set on the mounds
With a promise to rise anew tomorrow,
Like the human ambitions quite profound

Look crabs scurry to hide under sandstones
Scooping pelicans with mouthful of fish,
Water receding leaving sand-beds zones
Sounds receding to its minimum relish.                      

Come let us get away from the turmoil,
Isn’t time for us to be in peace to coil?

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Date : 17-9-13
Honorable Mention
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sonnet of Iambic Pentameter
Contest: Any poem of your best poetic form by P.D.

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  1. Date: 11/18/2013 5:16:00 PM

    Wonderful piece..Great write..Congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Very nicely described! This poem was calming and relaxing to read. I enjoyed it! Really good work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poems. I really do appreciate it!

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:59:00 AM

    congrats on a fine win Dr Ram

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 1:58:00 AM

    Congratulation on your lovely win Dr.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:01:00 PM

    Dr Ram. . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:14:00 AM

    nice form

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:23:00 AM

    ohh, it's you, dr,ram.. wonderful piece; i cited this and hoped we included the rules of the contest... still, a winning gem..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Very vivid descriptions. I felt like I was on the shore. Good luck in the contest. SuZ

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 4:22:00 AM

    oh this is wonderful poetry, so visual, a joy to read,,,

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:03:00 AM

    You sure have a way with words. I enjoyed your impression of a sandy getaway. Brilliant as always Dr.Ram. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 1:05:00 AM

    nature comes to life in verse, different view of life imerse, like it Dr.Ram

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 12:40:00 AM

    A very lovely poem with outstanding imagery and feeling to it Dr. Ram.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Thank you dr. Ram for your very kind comments on my poem and this is really enjoyable I'm on holiday in a few weeks and hope it is as good as yours. Robert CD

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 10:41:00 AM

    It all sounds very inviting Dr. Ram, i have sent you a soupmail xxx

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:53:00 AM

    I'm sure you enjoyed your holiday in the Island. Such refreshing outings rejuvenate the mind. I am mostly inspired to write when at peace with nature. Well written poem..JM