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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Good morning, well worth reading again. Exceptional.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 6:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your great win....

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 10:31:00 PM
    staller write, becca.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 3:30:00 PM
    well, quite an epic piece here, becca, I can tell a lot of thought and work went into it - congrats on your great win! :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 3:00:00 PM
    Wonderful poetry, Becca! I believe that I have read this one before, and I love it just as much now, as I did then! I knew this poem would place high! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you very much for the kind comments!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 2:00:00 PM
    Well done indeed Becca! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:53:00 PM
    congratulations on your win Becca, this is beautiful...xoxo...#lost for words.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:54:00 PM
    So much romance in here, worthy of top place, congratulations on your win Becca excellent writing xxx

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:36:00 PM the way you wrote this one much depth into that painting through your words...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:06:00 PM
    I expected to see this one recurve a high placement, it appears I was right.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/1/2013 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I meant receive *lol* congratulations Becca!
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Congratulations Becca, I had already read this, though I can't see a previous comment, not at all suprised to see this on top, a beautiful and brilliant write. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Congrats, Becca! I am very pleased with the way you described the thoughts, personalities, and feelings of your characters. So many vivid and beautiful scenes as well! I found it all very creative and realistic.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Just as I predicted down below. haha. CONGRATS

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Loved it...such a great piece...

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:02:00 PM
    Love does how you showed the wisdom of the mother pleading the daughter's case. An awesome story and so beautifully written Becca. I love it! I got the keys to my new house and been busy packing, moving this weekend. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:06:00 AM
    I read this one again Becca, you did an amazing job. I love all the details you have included as well as capturing the mood.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Wow....what a story....loved it ..gonna score big!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:47:00 PM
    wow, you really got into this, Becca. Yours is one of THE absolutely BEST in the contest. It's for sure gonna beat mine on the list, if I get there at all. haha

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Excellent entry Becca: This will be a winner. SuZ

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Becca, I really enjoyed reading this gem, your ending made me smile tonight. All the best with this beauty for the contest. Love & hugs Wilma