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Overcoming Sandstorms

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Overcoming Sandstorms

                                                   
O~n occasion, the mind accretes to, "the hurt," when facing
V~icissitudes; blinded by, "the better nature," causing to
E~fface the focus from the Architect while simultaneously
R~aising questions why. Impatience encourages the 
C~ollaboration of misery to consult with those of the same mind.
O~nly then to find temporary pleasure due to humanly clocks power.
M~entally drained by dint of attacks upon attacks; seemingly to be
I~nsufferable and impregnable. Though the Architect, 
N~ever vanishes and will never vanish from the scene. So,
G~ive and release all apprehension with entire trust.

S~torms will arise from daybreak to nightfall. It must be remembered the
A~rchitect of whom in total control oversees misery so 
N~ever question the authority. Become courageous and 
D~etermined that, "This Too Shall Pass." Be conscious of
S~trength, wisdom and knowledge evolving afterwards.
T~oday, focus on the size of the Architect and Not
O~n what the mind can't do. Always
R~emain prayerful and faith filled.
M~ust never ignore the Architect of whom created life's puzzle
S~hifting all elements of sand in place from day to day.



(To those who will receive)


Architect-God
Vicissitudes- Ups and Downs
Insufferable-Unbearable
Impregnable-Unconquerable
Dint-Force
Efface-Wipe Away


Pace, INK-U-SCRIPT
Contest Title: Build Your Own Sand
9/16/2013

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  1. Date: 4/21/2014 1:04:00 AM

    This is such a magnificant write! Thank you very much for sharing this. Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 1:01:00 PM

    This is what you call an acrostic!!! Awesome write dear Pace, looking forward to reading some more of your work. alofas, Tiaua.

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 3:18:00 AM

    Amazing acrostic, Sandy

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 3:17:00 PM

    Beautiful! -R.R.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 12:13:00 PM

    P you spit that!!! lol "Shifting elements of sand in place from day to day".... wonderful! 'A place for everything...;' including our emotions and beliefs ;)

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:32:00 PM

    "Become courageous and D~etermined that, "This Too Shall Pass." Be conscious of S~trength, wisdom and knowledge evolving afterwards." Favorite line...

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Not stalking you or anything... just stopping by to say hello and see if you have a new poem posted. Take care :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 1/30/2014 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, it's a good one! ;)
    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 1/30/2014 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    heh well this was the third time I've written on this poem! lol Hi Flo :)
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 1/30/2014 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol Becca
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Brilliant composition - kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:36:00 AM

    Wow... a genius work of art. I captured the meaning of the Architect immediately. Wonderful metaphor and so inspiring. :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:47:00 PM

    Missing you ... hope everything is ok. Looking forward to more of your poems. (Don't forget about me over in my little corner of the soup.)

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 3:36:00 AM

    Very well done.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Excellent composition Pace! Deep write!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:41:00 PM

    wow. Incredible read!! You are one excellent writier ... I remember you when you first came to poetry soup. I was so taken by your pen.. Your words speak volumes... Cindy (Lucinda)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:46:00 AM

    Tis was a great poem that I enjoyed reading very much. When I was in my teens, we lived in a place where we had Sand Storms everyday. They were pretty bad, but as you say - God is the Architect. thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:10:00 AM

    pace, heartfelt and rich in imagery.. congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:12:00 PM

    a beautiful winning poem...Linda

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:11:00 PM

    This really touched me today...thank you and congratulations

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:39:00 PM

    Excellent architecture and word Pace, congrats on your winning poetry, it takes much skill to do this xx

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:41:00 PM

    Congratulations fam! Flame on! A brilliant message contained on this jewel!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:22:00 AM

    i love writing acrostics, this is great ...Seren

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:29:00 AM

    very well crafted acrostic, a beautiful write! congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Acrostic always comes hard for me.......you have made it look easy and flow so beautifully. Congratulations on a wonderful take of the sand!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:09:00 AM

    My dear friend Pace, this is a stunning write. So like and love it. Many big hearty congratulations on your great win! Thank you so much as well for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:53:00 AM

    pace this is incredible love, love it congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:23:00 AM

    I knew this beauty was going to be a winner in Nette's contest Page. A big congratulations to you as well. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:33:00 AM

    Pace, remarkable writing to make this flow like you did! Congrats

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:56:00 AM

    I was erasing all my comments... You're still family, lol! This is a burner though, for real... Good luck homie!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:20:00 AM

    Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed the form and the topic of the work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:00:00 PM

    It is not easy to do acrostic and make it seem natural...... you have done a terrific piece here!! Great job!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Hi ink,,,, your words are so needed to be said,,, they are a blessing to read!!! Thank you for a great reminder!!! Never question, the authority~ love that line. Ty4sharing, your words of wisdom. Much appreciated <3 cherie

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