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Overcoming Sandstorms

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Overcoming Sandstorms

O~n occasion, the mind accretes to, "the hurt," when facing
V~icissitudes; blinded by, "the better nature," causing to
E~fface the focus from the Architect while simultaneously
R~aising questions why. Impatience encourages the 
C~ollaboration of misery to consult with those of the same mind.
O~nly then to find temporary pleasure due to humanly clocks power.
M~entally drained by dint of attacks upon attacks; seemingly to be
I~nsufferable and impregnable. Though the Architect, 
N~ever vanishes and will never vanish from the scene. So,
G~ive and release all apprehension with entire trust.

S~torms will arise from daybreak to nightfall. It must be remembered the
A~rchitect of whom in total control oversees misery so 
N~ever question the authority. Become courageous and 
D~etermined that, "This Too Shall Pass." Be conscious of
S~trength, wisdom and knowledge evolving afterwards.
T~oday, focus on the size of the Architect and Not
O~n what the mind can't do. Always
R~emain prayerful and faith filled.
M~ust never ignore the Architect of whom created life's puzzle
S~hifting all elements of sand in place from day to day.

(To those who will receive)

Vicissitudes- Ups and Downs
Efface-Wipe Away

Contest Title: Build Your Own Sand

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  1. Date: 5/13/2014 2:52:00 PM
    Lol @ allstar pen, it's truly appreciated. One day hopefully, I can see it as the reader does... AllStar Pen is a cold title, Ink!.you pen exceptionally homie, never doubt it. I watched us both grow while being here!

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 10:20:00 PM
    This is a very interesting write. The architect as you say is the creator of all tings. I have been all kind of storms. Many years ago I lived in Malta Idaho. That must have been the capital of the Sand storms, we had them everyday. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

    Date: 4/25/2014 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so kindly for visiting and for your precious comment..I really appreciate it.
  1. Date: 4/24/2014 9:19:00 AM
    Your comments move me beyond words. A lot of times I'm thinking what is it that the reader sees, that I don't as the writer... It's a mutual respect, I've been amazed at your pen for 2 years now baby boy... Keep burning like blue flame!

    Date: 4/25/2014 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is one POWERFUL comment!!!!!
  1. Date: 4/24/2014 9:09:00 AM
    'Play Ball' is about my wife. She was on the hospital for 2 months; pneumonia, h1n1(swine flu), heart failure and a.r.d.s. It's a miracle the doctors said, for her to be alive. Thank the lord for that!... I wad just thinking about you, and you becoming a dad. Ypu better spend some money on you now, because lil man or lil mama has dibs on your check for the next 20 years. Ha ha ha

  1. Date: 4/21/2014 1:04:00 AM
    This is such a magnificant write! Thank you very much for sharing this. Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 1:01:00 PM
    This is what you call an acrostic!!! Awesome write dear Pace, looking forward to reading some more of your work. alofas, Tiaua.

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 3:18:00 AM
    Amazing acrostic, Sandy

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 3:17:00 PM
    Beautiful! -R.R.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 12:13:00 PM
    P you spit that!!! lol "Shifting elements of sand in place from day to day".... wonderful! 'A place for everything...;' including our emotions and beliefs ;)

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:32:00 PM
    "Become courageous and D~etermined that, "This Too Shall Pass." Be conscious of S~trength, wisdom and knowledge evolving afterwards." Favorite line...

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Brilliant composition - kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Wow... a genius work of art. I captured the meaning of the Architect immediately. Wonderful metaphor and so inspiring. :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 3:36:00 AM
    Very well done.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Excellent composition Pace! Deep write!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:41:00 PM
    wow. Incredible read!! You are one excellent writier ... I remember you when you first came to poetry soup. I was so taken by your pen.. Your words speak volumes... Cindy (Lucinda)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:46:00 AM
    Tis was a great poem that I enjoyed reading very much. When I was in my teens, we lived in a place where we had Sand Storms everyday. They were pretty bad, but as you say - God is the Architect. thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:10:00 AM
    pace, heartfelt and rich in imagery.. congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:12:00 PM
    a beautiful winning poem...Linda

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:11:00 PM
    This really touched me today...thank you and congratulations

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Excellent architecture and word Pace, congrats on your winning poetry, it takes much skill to do this xx