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INDIFFERENCE

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INDIFFERENCE

INDIFFERENCE



Battered by the hurricane of your
Indifference
My heart, hastily took refuge         
Into
The harbor of solitude! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
16 SEPTEMBER 2013

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  1. Date: 12/4/2013 10:23:00 AM

    While waiting for you to post a new poem, I thought I'd read something of yours I haven't seen yet. I feel this one, deeply. Indifference from someone we love is worse than anything almost... and yes, retreating to solitude, that is what we do. Excellent poem. I admire so much how you can write something so powerful in so few words. Would have taken me 8 stanzas to convey my thoughts about this topic. Hope you are well... hugs

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Nothing quite hurts like indifference. We know a great deal about the other emotions.

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/27/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Gerald, for your visit! You are absolutely right!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 2:32:00 PM

    hi Demetrios full of deep feelings and some hurt? really enjoyed it Shadow x smile

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello my dear, Shadow, so wonderful for you to visit, thank you so much! Do not worry!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 2:06:00 PM

    This is sad, but still nice. Smile - we love you here at P.S. . Today I'm sad - It would have been my Anniversary. Thanks for sharing.

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Lucy, so nice to see you again! I am so sorry that you cannot be with the person you have shared your life and celebrate your Anniversary! Thank you for visiting!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:24:00 PM

    I in NOW WAY meant to say that this was not a BEAUTIFUL piece in its own right! You KNOW...I love you work....

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know ,Eileen that you didn't mean something like that, I really do!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:24:00 PM

    I in NOW WAY meant to say that this was not a BEAUTIFUL piece in its own right! You KNOW...I love you work....

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:57:00 AM

    WOW! As Eileen said... such a sad write! Bring back those beautiful love poems! Cheers, your Canadian compatriot!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My friend and compatriot, Jack, hello. First I would like to thank you for your visit and comment that I am certain it comes from your heart as it does Eileen's comment! Since you both wish me to return to the romantic writing I would make an effort from time to time to do so, however, you both know that life is not only laughter but tears as well and I for one cannot overlook that fact from time to time! Thank you again my friend!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 5:30:00 AM

    I think the greatest two words within this poem is certainly "Indifference" the main theme of this incredible write, and "solitude" the overall goal of this write, at least that is what it seems to be to me! This piece make so much sense to me, it seems that I might be within a hurricane of life that batters me, at least of the past month! This amazing poem means a lot to me and it's significance is remarkable! I really loved reading this magnificent verse this morning, Great Work!!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are absolutely right my dear friend, Russell. "Indifference" and " Solitude" are the two words that I contrast to give dynamism and harmony to this little Epigram of mine. Thank you for visiting and I am happy you liked it!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:01:00 AM

    Indifference can act as a muse sometimes, if you let it. Right now, I think that it is acting as a muse for you. Wonderful poem. Beverly

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, yes, anything can inspire us and anything we write can be beautiful even though it may be sad! Thank you for visiting it is so kind!
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 3:52:00 AM

    My dear poet, this is a very sad write...I miss the romantic writes you used to pen that brought light and joy and life. Please, oblige and write another such masterpiece...Me agapi...H Mykrouli

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/16/2013 5:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, my dearest, although I would agree with you about the content I would like to say that even sadness and unhappiness can create beautiful writing. Of course, I do not claim that this little poem of mine is worthy but I am happy to have written it! Thank you for your visit and for being there!