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Inner peace - Lonliness Contest

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Inner peace - Lonliness Contest

Why do I always feel alone  inside
What will it take to fill this hollow place
Lonliness eats away your inner pride
Only love can fight this hapless trace
Helping me to find my inner peace my solace     

You entered my life this magical day
Answering my prayers in a winning way
A big smiley face no trace of a frown
Filling the emptiness love comes to stay, 
Happiness pervades no longer alone

 Form:   Dizain.    ababb.   ccdcd

Penned 9 September 2013

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Another form for me to try. I like this poem a lot. Great work.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/30/2013 2:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Wayland. Thanks
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Thanks for hosting an interesting contest, you had some great entries. Thanks for placing my little poem.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My pleasure Richard, glad yours was one I chose ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Seren I like the internal rhyme in this little gem, nice to read your work again, if it's for a contest good luck...David xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    David lovely to see you. Thank you for your good wishes ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:21:00 PM
    so much heart in this splendid piece, seren... thank you for making me part of your contest...:) huggs!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nette Hi thanks for your comments ....Seren
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Hi Seren did you mean taken or take? I like the happy ending!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard, I meant take my fingers cant spell lol...Seren
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:21:00 AM
    If it is for the contest, please give once over for spelling in the third line

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you i must have read that a dozen times and missed it....Seren
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:50:00 PM
    Excellent. A beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ravi nice to see you again....Seren
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:13:00 PM
    This is simply a gorgeous write, a beautiful write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this immaculate poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/16/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Russell Hi, thanks for comment, u impressed I used a new form for me...Seren