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If You Can't Stand the Heat

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If You Can't Stand the Heat

Oh, my dear, 'tis plain to see
That you lack Humility
Why must you whine o'er rugged rhymes,
That ill-affect your poetry?

Helping hands are hither slapped,
At a mere suggestion
In thine self, bruised ego wrapped
When thy work is questioned!

Begrudge, me not, the better Poet:
I was right, and both we know it!

*I SPIT FIRE CONTEST ENTRY

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Chan The Man This is both hilarious and violent at the same time. I hope I'm never berated like this by you. I promise to be a good girl. HEE HEE Thanks for the incredible comment on my Universe poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/20/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My Sweet Revenge Poem lol thanks, Sweet Pea ;)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Deftly pointed. Glad I'm not on the receiving end. Congratulations, stated with admiration.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/30/2013 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Mark! I was pleasantly surprised that F.J. picked this as a second place winner; I am humbled and grateful. I appreciate the congrats :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 7:01:00 AM

    This was awesome and you were short changed as I didn't realize this poem was marked 3rd instead of 2nd. SO please inbox me your PayPal email address and CONGRATS!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/30/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, F.J.! As I told Mark, I am pleasantly surprised you chose this for second place; I am very much humbled and appreciative. Thanks for hosting such a fun contest! :D
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 7:43:00 AM

    HAHAHAHA I almost drowned while drinking coffee. This is artistically hilarious! ...well now I feel a bit sorry for whomever this was aimed at :o

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/13/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A foolish person wrote a poem aimed at me for giving her "constructive criticism" on one of her pieces, so I decided to trash her, in an eloquent, yet humorous way lol. Thanks for dropping by and for all the reviews, Jake :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:49:00 PM

    hahaha, this one is pretty cool!!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/11/2013 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thanks. My REVENGE poem! Thanks for the read and reply, Andrea :)
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:16:00 AM

    what a fun piece to read, had me grinning right through. I love your use of language =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/5/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You have humbled me greatly this morning, Thomas, with all your glowing reviews. Means more to me than I can express. Glad you have enjoyed my work and I hope we can be friends. You seem like an awesome guy :)
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:45:00 PM

    I read elsewhere in one of your comments you're a rhymester. I had to come check out your work and I'm happy I did. This is my first of yours and definitely not my last. I love your style (long name). Licia :-)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/15/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Licia. I must confess that "rhyming" is really my only poetic forte; I feel it's what I do best and it makes me happy to hear that you enjoy my style; makes me feel immeasurably good inside; thank you. This was a "revenge poem" so if you like my work, I implore you to go back and read earlier posts. Thanks for dropping by, and you can call me TAP, in short :)
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Laughing my a** off ! The satirical quality is brilliant. Very funny and so true

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/15/2013 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *Wink, wink* Glad you liked it <3