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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Thom This is a fantastic write that takes the reader on a journey of this magical place that will always stay in your heart. the memories and friends will never leave you. Nice job The comment on my Couples Courtesy poem was hopeful that it does happen soon for everyone Hugs

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:31:00 PM
    Really enjoyed your story and memories of friends and the old hangout..and all being together again somewhere again....awesome...

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 3:49:00 PM
    I really enjoyed reading both chapters of this story! It is what we would expect Al Capone or John Dillinger to write, had they still been alive...I love it when a poem can take us to another place and time that we were unable to experience ourselves...Wonderful work!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:38:00 AM
    amazing amazing... goodbye's to a good joint... great story... Linda

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:26:00 PM
    I was talking about your reply to my comment, btw

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:25:00 PM
    good to know!!!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:25:00 PM
    ok, I am looking again at your avatar and this CAN'T be a 90 year old guy writing this!! Unless you are using a younger picture. haha. Please let me know. If it's not autobiographical, you are a darn good writer!!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 3:04:00 PM
    Oh. I see your comment at the bottom of this one only says the same as my comment on the last. Mate they're a nice read, more prosey than poetry, but I like their style. If nobody else minds (and I certainly don't) let them stay.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Je bois a ta sante mons cher amie translation: I drink to your good health my dear friend, until you're still on this earth, keep sharing with us your soup friends, you are a delight to have around love and peace xxx