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Veritable

Dear friend
i don't know what is love
Attraction of hearts.
when i saw you
my thought tries to modify,
Ask why i fall in you?
I spread all my feelings in the free air
my cares
and my deep love into shallow environment.
My request to collect,
rearrange my L-O-V-E .

Why you meet me
Embrace my eye,
Embarrass the stupid soul !
why life playing with my play...
Only hope to wait for gravity !
I'm so angry with Sir Newton
for His 3rd law...No back from her!


14/09/2013
Earth attract everything towards it by the gravity force.I want to have gravity to attract you

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 12:26:00 AM
    Litan, , The end of the year is approaching :) :) :) And guess what? There's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer"

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:48:00 AM
    I am so charmed by your work. The remark you made about Newton is particularly filled with incite. Every action should have an equal and opposite reaction. Hey, this is really something special. What I wish for you is that you find the most magnificent love that fills your heart to the brim.

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/15/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks duke for your nice comments.....Have a good day
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:42:00 AM
    this is very pretty Litan, a bit gloomy... so much for gravity.. LOL,,, hope faith meets your heart... xox...Linda

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/14/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh you are there.....i can understand!!!!Thank you for passing by
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:32:00 AM
    - Never deny love .... listen to your heart ... - I have just written a poem about the heart, but have not posted it yet. - A Nice, but slightly sad poem you wrote today Litan! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/14/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ohh sorry ....i missed it.Thank you