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The Lover Wind

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The Lover Wind

A lover most capricious is the wind.
At times he goes to Meadow. He exhales. . .
Beneath his breath, her grasses’ blades are pinned
until he’s spent, and then, away he sails.

He’s been to visit Forest many nights.
He gyrates through each tree, whose every limb
responds by rustling leaves, and this excites
him even more. He moans and gusts with vim!

But lust is inundating when Queen Sea
meets Wind.  She surges when he starts to wail.
Her body rolls and rises. . . . Ecstasy
the times he comes as Tempest or as Gale.

But I prefer the side of Wind that’s soft. . .
when he caresses me with gentle waft.


By Andrea Dietrich for Giorgio A.V.'s  Impress me with a Small Poem IV!
Motif: Nature

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  1. Date: 3/17/2014 11:24:00 AM

    Way to go!!! Yeah!! Sara

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 1:04:00 AM

    Great poem, great win Andrea...Congratulations, my friend....peter

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 5:45:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Andrea. I enjoyed reading this stunner again.

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 6:40:00 PM

    great writing Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 9:47:00 AM

    Well written...You tried to write the expectations of women...It's globally truth..As a man I prefer the side of Wind that’s soft. . . when she caresses me with gentle waft...Best wishes from India...

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 8:20:00 AM

    Splendid write Andrea...congrats on a great win

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 7:15:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Andrea. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 5:32:00 AM

    Andrea! Congrats on your great win and well written poem. G.

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 2:26:00 AM

    Congrats on the fine w2in in the contest Impress me IV, andrea

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 2:11:00 AM

    Congrats, Andy, promiscuous wind doing it with the meadow, forest and sea, well done!!

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 12:03:00 AM

    Do these visions just come into your head? Where do you find the inspiration to let your talent run wild? Tremendous work I am in awe!

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 7:38:00 PM

    I am quite impressed with this personification Andrea. Congratulations on the win

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 7:34:00 PM

    Giorgio A.V. is not the ONLY one who is impressed with a small poem IV...WOW

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 6:53:00 PM

    Personification it is and beautifully written Andrea.... Congratulations on your first place win. :)s and hugs from Oblivion Dark Sunshine - Verlena.

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 6:47:00 PM

    The lover wind, wow, what a win. Amazing.... SKAT

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 9:46:00 PM

    A sailor knows the wind. He lives with her every day. The wolf upon the foredeck the lashing of the ropes in the masts. There's love there to be found as we all must love our work. But until we get to land tis no lover for me. ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:47:00 PM

    Andrea What a sexy and sensual write about the wind. I will never think of it the same way again. LOL Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Holiday Wishes poem

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:08:00 PM

    Wha hoo you make the wind sound so sexy on this write. Love the personification you used. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:29:00 PM

    That wind certainly gets around Petal, seems he's enjoying himself a little too much lol. You created some perfect relationships in this write. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Beautiful, stunning, sensual poem. There are definitely many facets to the wind.

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Clever and passionate write, now seeing wind in a new light ; ) .....love it! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 11:51:00 AM

    What a stunning write this is Andrea, gotta admit I prefer his gentle side too ;) all the best for the contest with this beauty. Luv Wilma

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Oh a very beautiful and sensual write, I love the personification of the wind.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:46:00 AM

    I prefer that part of the wind too sweet andrea..Ow yeah that wafting wind and its breezes.A beautoful poem with excellent personifications dear.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 7:04:00 PM

    Sometimes he likes it nice and rough and blows it all away. And then he'll kiss your cheek so soft you won't know what to say. The difference in the mood he's in is as wide as oceans deep. Which is probably why so many ships are down there fast asleep. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:16:00 PM

    EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING SO MUCH BEAUTY WRAPPED IN ONE

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:32:00 PM

    Excellent. Well penned. A beautiful sonnet. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:01:00 PM

    Tou certainly used some obscure,fascinating language in this one. You are one of the most popular poets on thiis website! This poem is quite sensous. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:50:00 PM

    and yet another of your poems straight to my fav poem list....this is a beautifully written sonnet....if it's for the contest, good luck, it spells winner to me :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:47:00 PM

    Your poem is a living melody my friend.

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