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Haiku 84

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Haiku 84

	
	
	
	Haiku 84
	
	write with abandon 
	about heart... butterflies...
	her fierce beauty
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 3:27:00 PM
    those words stand out great in the three lines lovely jack tina x

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/14/2013 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the comment, Tina.
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:46:00 PM
    visually engaging, jack.. you really pulled me in with this strong 'ku.. :) huggs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/14/2013 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always, Nette. I appreciate your comments... Jack
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Jack, a wonderful haiku... enjoyed the fierce imagery... deep....always..Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/14/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Linda... Jack
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:14:00 AM
    I love that line: write with abandon. So nice.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/14/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks... Have a good weekend... Jack