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Maze of Mirrors

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Maze of Mirrors

See me run in sleepy circles,
Lost in Life's unending Maze
Mirrored corners and corridors 
(Drugged and slow and in a daze)

Mistaken; forsaken- Oh, I wish I would awaken!
The Voice of Reason in the midst of Confusion
Misguided; undecided- fearsome path so dimly lighted-
And all I see is simply an Illusion!

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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Chan my friend We all get lost in life sometimes and feel trapped, but follow the light and it will be me at the end helping you escape. Thanks for the nice comment on my Christmas Fun poem. Just don't shoot your eye out. LOL Hugs and Love

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/9/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL! Isn't that a grrreat movie? Thanks, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:56:00 PM

    This is a really neat piece. I feel anyone who can paint an image or scene into a readers mind but simply using words is a great writer. I could picture the entire poem in my head while reading, you did great.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/14/2013 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the humbling review, Kalee; it means a great deal to me :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:10:00 PM

    STUCK IN THAT MAZE BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/13/2013 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Liam! :)