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Utterly Ridiculous

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Utterly Ridiculous

Was I born a Soul forlorn;
And do we find out who we truly are?
(Between two Lovers I am torn,
Both of which I love by far!)
Without decision, upon a breast
I lie in bliss while kindly kissed
I love them more to love me less-
Lost inside our little tryst

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:54:00 AM
    I like Dr. Ram Mehta's comment. In addition, the feelings are very well scripted

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    Date: 9/14/2013 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Nice expressions on love and lust

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    Date: 9/14/2013 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, good Dr. Much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 11:47:00 AM
    What a great poem. Bravo!

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    Date: 9/13/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I cannot thank you enough for your kind words, Jon; I sincerely appreciate them :)