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Lately I've Been Feeling Like:

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Lately I've Been Feeling Like:

A piano being played
A donkey chasing carrots
A suitor turned suitless
A wise man turned fool

I think you cannot decide
I think you refuse to decide
I think I thought I knew
I think I think too much

About only you
About only will you
About only won’t you
About only maybe

So weary of maybe
So weary of won’t you
So weary of will you
So weary of about only you

Life is short
Life is fragile
Live is precious
Life goes on…

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  1. Date: 9/13/2014 6:18:00 PM
    Tim, one of the very best this winning is perfection!

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 9:30:00 PM
    That's brilliant Tim! Love ur write full of vivid thoughts n vibrant emotions! Congrats on big win!

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:45:00 AM
    Hi Tim, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:06:00 AM
    I think I think too much too !! .....I think you think brilliantly !

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:03:00 AM
    Congrats on this fine write, Tim

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 7:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Tim.

  1. Date: 9/11/2014 11:12:00 PM
    Congratulations and thank you for entering the contest. Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:44:00 PM
    :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:42:00 PM
    I'm guilty of thinking too much, don't you wish there was an off switch some days? : ) Yes, life is precious and short, what is meant to be will be Tim, let's make a pact and both agree not to think too much okay. Terrific write! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 11:21:00 AM
    That first line captures so much in so many layers. Great tone this poem creates. Good to read you again, Tim: I have missed being around. Will share a poem I wrote about Ireland after my first visit there. It is a magical place and a land of poets. SuZ

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 3:40:00 AM
    I hope life is treating you well. Continue on and keep writing. I enjoyed reading a couple of your poems this early morning. Take special care and have a lovely rest of the week. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Ahhhh, but I read HOPE between the lines!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Of course i will. Ask, dammit, ask (lol). Lucky the being who managed to touch you so deeply. Good luck, Tim. May you have your answers soon. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:58:00 AM
    There is much more to this poem than first meets the eye.......I think some of these feelings are not just your poetic imagination having fun, but perhaps reflecting something more real, and needing to know where you stand. I hope you get the answers you are hoping for......and yes.....life is short, fragile, and precious..... I hope she recognizes it the same as you! :) Best wishes my friend!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:11:00 PM
    I like the way you wrote that Tim, it was kind of different, yes, this is true, life goes on, and never does what you want it to

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:34:00 AM
    ...life goes on...and so should we...

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:33:00 PM
    So intriguing this poem...So many questions unanswered..Yearning..thought..desire.Life is short ..lets make each day count and emotions flow..That s the clever sentimental msg i see here.Original as always Tim Tnks for stopping by my Oasis.big smile : )

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Wow! Quite unique! Facinating piece.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Oh Tim, I'm faving this. It is so beautiful and full of emotions....Don't wait...make a move! ;) Hugs!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:27:00 PM
    I couldn't have said it better myself. I love the piano and carrot line. Everyday I wake, I need to live in the now, and not waste my time on weary feelings. My life is to precious. Tim, this is a nice one. I'm happy for you. Don't ever be someones fool. I know how it feels to have your mind only on one person. this reminds me of a song called... "I got my mind set on you." by George Harrison. ps... thank you for supporting my contest... always & forever The Poet Destroyer

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