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Color My World

Color my world with your own,
somewhere over these city streets
Let me find a brook, a stream, a creek
For Christ knows how I prayed to be meek
I don't need money to be happy,
maybe a new dress to make every now and then

God, Color my world with your own,
Let me find a hill to stand on and smell the Spring rain
and watch everything turn green;
a place to get the rest that I need
Though today the valley seems so near
Merciful God With Us,
Color my world with what you think is best

Let my God Given name, not find fame that would shame
~ in my prayers I pray for a man to share my all
Let me look to the sky and know that I'm alright
The sun's brightness comes now,
and the rain with a bit of chill

Color my world Oh God, if this is all I am to see
I am thankful for the breath you still give to me


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  1. Date: 3/18/2014 9:27:00 AM
    Beautiful prayer Cindy. The purity of your soul shines through this poetic pleadings to the very source of your soul. May God add more colour to your world. Best wishes. Henry

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 10:16:00 AM
    this is amazing Cindy, love the imagery ...

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:03:00 PM
    I love the style and lack of walls in your writing......you seem to let it all hang out. take care.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:19:00 AM
    A beautiful & touching reflection about your heart, what matters, & your life surroundings. Wonderfully expressed! It's clear you value the simple things.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Most profound write. I very much enjoyed this. I loved especially the last part. The final words are the icing on the cake Well done :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:12:00 AM
    I appreciate all of God work. It was very pleasant too read this beautiful poem. JCMT

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:33:00 PM
    I'm still thankful for every breath too... Psst! Your missing a "t" in stream. Hee, hee... :o)