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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Another great poem, but even in this, I see the beginnings of much more. Write a script, book, play, or something Thomas. People would want to read it! Bev

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 11/2/2013 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's pretty good!
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 10:43:00 PM
    This is so lovely and sweet. Full of devotion, tenderness, heart and caring. great job. Congrats on the top new poets. Just found out I made it also.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:18:00 PM
    Hello Thomas, stopping by to read this captivating poem.... Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:48:00 PM
    A very mesmerizing poem! Love can sure cast a spell on us from time to time! This was written very well, I really liked the pauses and the flow of the words in this poem! Great work!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 7:16:00 AM
    A ba ca d abra xxx