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'ADEUS'

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'ADEUS'


After all this time
Dare we go there?
Eventually we have no choice
Unknowingly the decision was made for us  
So although I am a little sad this is adieu; until we meet again


*Gerald (suggestion of the word in Portuguese)  & Jack (his persistency :)
Hope you are not disappointed* 

©146011092013

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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:49:00 PM
    this is very nice, Wilma.It was not in my contest, was it?

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 1:24:00 PM
    I'd rather have hello's from you than goodbye, thinking of you fondly xxx

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:20:00 AM
    I know I'm not disappointed. I like it. Good poem

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Very well expressed! As a really good song goes, "Sometimes goodbye is a 2nd chance". Nicely done!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:19:00 AM
    ...... do you mean goodbye .... (here P-soup???????????) - Wilma, I'm very sad ...HOPE it is "only a poem!" !!!!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/11/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Delighted to hear your reply !! :)))) - Big hugs !!!!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Please tell me this is only a poem... right? You ain't going nowhere... right? Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:36:00 AM
    This is a wonderfully creative write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a dynamic poem, Great Work!!