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TENDER WAFT ON FLEET

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TENDER WAFT ON FLEET


As tangy air swerves through my whistling mind
that gently rouses, oh ‘pon fair moonlight,
I raise my cheeks  to taste the wind, refined 
through quivers, of the ever- threading night. 

And copper-like, my senses, mildly clothed
with fibrils circling traces on warm flesh;
this zephyr cool, guiding a haze provoked
by mystery held by sky’s roll, afresh.

And dusk will print windchimes ’ fore new dawn
while starlit guardian just bids me still. 
My breath thus feed the hours with time reborn 
as tender waft on fleet, sings soft goodwill.

That I, a child of dew, shall testify
as witness to rare embrace of billow’s sigh.


Sonnet In The Wind, Poetess Darkly

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 3:15:00 PM
    I love your verse and meter. While it is true that I am already partial to Iambic Pentameter, it is the illustrative poetic language that truly makes it come alive. Your poem is alive inside of me. Thank you for sharing, and GRATS on the placement. I would rate you first place. Christopher Thor Britt

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:27:00 PM
    nette, another nice win............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 9:22:00 AM
    This work is awesome!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 7:13:00 PM
    gorgeous sonnet...this poem is a gem with such beautiful images... worthy of your win...congrats Nette...:)

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Beautiful sonnet. Congrats on your win nette. :) G.

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Yours and Craig's poems created a similar internal reaction in me. I just love the way you write Nette. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:27:00 AM
    You lure the humming bird with your title and then reward with sweet words! Well deserved win!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 8:45:00 AM
    I'm kind of like Charlotte nette....how you can take the available words of our language and arrange them so beautifully is beyond me...you do it time after time...congratulations my friend....

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 9/29/2013 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    But I always find pleasure in reading them....they bring peace
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:11:00 PM
    This is no doubt a brilliant write my friend. Well done!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 6:09:00 AM
    I'm sorry I don't seem to comment much on you these days, nette - it's simply that there is nothing I can say that I haven't already said lots of times before! I continue to be awed by your imagery and the way you bend and manipulate language, and this piece is another fine example of that :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 10:21:00 AM
    THAT PIECE JUST WHISTLED BEAUTIFUL IN THE MIND

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:56:00 AM
    oh wow beautiful nette xx

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:22:00 PM
    What a sensitive and sensual piece... Beautiful writing as always... Jack

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Such wonderment, such intrigue you give to me by the incredible nature of this write! I loved the line, "That I, child of dew, shall testify" that is such a tremendous line for an incredible poem my friend! You have delighted me again by writing this amazing piece here! I really loved reading this fantastic poem this evening! What a brilliant verse, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Bet you have a dictionary hiding underneath your pillow, and it has words we only dream of using, psst, I like, love to you xxx

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Creative work penned..It does have an old world feel to it..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:27:00 PM
    This has an old World feel to it. I really enjoyed feeling like I was reading from an ancient manuscript. Breathtaking piece. Hugs Rick. Soup Mail

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:20:00 PM
    I raise my cheeks to.taste the wind/ as tender waft on misty feet,sings goodwill/That I a child of dew-These verses and more tickles the reader's heart.An extreme beauty going to my favs. Re Drake s show..Im going to do my best to be listening to him ..you if you call and my dear friends.I might skip calling this time..Firstly because I have a change of season cold and my voice is like that of a chiwawa mixed with a bull dog :)and i hve butterflies churn till i call..but i will listen .dwar

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 9/10/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cont-i ll do my best to.listen to.it..and maybe hearing you and others will encourage me to recall next time..big hug
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:51:00 PM
    - So beautifully written .... let your mind flow ... release stress and bustle... well done, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:50:00 PM
    An intimate expression of what breathes inside your soul and quill.Words carefully chosen and fashioned together create a strong voice wanting to be heard.I'll have any time of day!

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