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Backache


A backache 
sound of bones cracking
needs a massage 



September 11, 2013
5th Place Winner
For SKAT's "Haiku" Contest

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 7:35:00 AM
    nice poem like the flow ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 7:58:00 AM
    nothing more relaxing then a massage...nice haiku :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 3:51:00 AM
    i love thai massage.. i was just there a month ago, my 5th visit, and your work makes me want to be pampered again... absolutely inviting, paz!.. sweet congrats..:) huggs

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/19/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i will wait for you here ;)
    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud
    Date: 9/28/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    did i hear " sjiatsu?".. am on my wa there!..:) sweetness!
    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank friend Nette..if ever you visit thailand Again just let me know :) I will give you a free "Shiatsu" have a nice day
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 2:21:00 AM
    "Enjoying' the 'benefits' (...) of being diagnosed with a 'traumatic whiplash- syndrome' your haiku is ear-deafening to me ..and causing shivers (not goosebumps) What a good (!) haiku (can accomplish) :+)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Ellie ;)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:27:00 AM
    congrats on placing Shadow x smile

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Shadow :)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 9:35:00 AM
    nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Sandra ;)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Maria

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Dr. Ram ;)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:39:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your win, Maria . - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Anne. God bless
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:47:00 PM
    Yep, that is what I need too!!! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Maria, loving your win. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks SKAT. God bless
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:56:00 PM
    ouch, my back hurt just reading this, lol - excellent write

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 5:20:00 AM
    Reads as though one needs some youth tonic for the disc..Know exactly the feeling and sound from experience..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Awe, Maria, it sounds achy. great haiku. Hope you get the massage for them aching bones... xox~ Linda

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i change my mind to have a thia massage..I am bedridden for days because of my backache but I'm fine no..thanks dear PD
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:47:00 PM
    Excellent. Well said. Tfs

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/26/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend :)
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:47:00 PM
    The massage therapist is on his way. Gift wrapped...lol.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 9/15/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lovely poem by the way my friend.
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:23:00 AM
    Oh, your very beautiful poem made me think that I also probably need massage my very dear friend Maria. But, not the thai massage anymore unless I can instruct them well to do it more gently in their language ;))) but, i think I'll have siatsu )) safer for a delicate me ;)) A great poem indeed. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Big big hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/16/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I changed my mind to have a thai massage..I want "Siatsu" but who will do it? I can give you a siatsu..just tell me when :) :) for free :)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:59:00 AM
    - Yes ..... they have I heard and felt many times.... I NEED MASSAGE !!! - Well written, Maria !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/11/2013 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will give you free massage :) :) Next week, I plan to have a thai massage...good luck to me :) thanks for passing by friend Anne
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:18:00 AM
    Hi Maria - well penned! I love how the poem manages to bring to mind the pain caused when one experiences backache. nicely done.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/11/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Vicky :)
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:01:00 PM
    ouch, that poor aching back. I would love one of those massages, sweetie. Can you get me one?

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/11/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes, friend Andrea, I can give you a soothing massage..I know "Siatsu Massage Therapy" but right now my back is a little better now..foolish of me to sit in front of the computer for a long time..thanks for passing by