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Treasure

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Treasure

in a gentle breeze
whistling moans
stroking the water
softly furls
in waves ashore

a clam
two seashells
joined living
each wave
parting emotions
as one

brushing a tropical seabed
drifting ashore feelings
washed up 
on golden sands
a searching dream

at home
were the heart is
softly 
gently blowing
caressed by the breeze
gone with the wind

as the tide recedes
leaving behind
picked up
with hands 
of love's
desire

a silent breath
i whisper heavenly
satin touching divine
beautiful within
the soul's eyes
treasured
dreamy

~ ~ ~ ~

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  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:25:00 PM
    a beautiful poem... stopping by to say goodnight... Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU FROM THE HEART SO SWEET BEAUTIFUL
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:04:00 PM
    This poem is a treasure in itself! Glad that I found this one. A very beautiful piece of poetry, Liam! I loved it!...Thank you for commenting kindly on my poem "My Only One". It really means a lot to me!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/10/2013 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    KELLY IT WAS A PLEASURE AS IS THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED THANK YOU KINDLY
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:52:00 AM
    In life many things are gone with the wind..Some others are to stay..Those i call treasures..the others memories. Home is where the heart is..and loving ourselves make us always feel home...That way if everybody s gone with the wind ..Our own existence would be enough to be happy..If they return in breeze's caress they can always be our guests.I love your thoughts penned here

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/10/2013 2:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAPPINESS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARMAINE IF YOU DO NOT HAVE THAT YOU HAVE NOTHING MONEY CAN NOT BUY YOUR COMMENT AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL I THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH HEARTFELT APPPRECIATED