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in gratitude

In gratitude 
Crying tears of blood 
Pain flowing 
down the cheeks 
Broken hearted 

To you I am sorry 
Your reasons unknown 
Wishing we had talked 
A simple reason enough 
Left with the shadow of doubt 
No longer close 

Hidden within you 
A secret 
Slowly bleeding 
the heart dry 
None more cruel 
Than silence 
The easy way out 

Bring me back to love 
Years of life 
lie wasted 
This wall created 
a summit 
All the emotion 
a man possessed 
Buried beneath the stones 
I tried to climb 

A secret so dark 
In the end 
turning cold 
Without even a heart 
You put the poker 
deep in the chest 

Hurting so deep 
As I bury myself 
Like a river 
it bleeds in hurt 
No easy way out 

Honesty 
Would have found me 
Instead you lied 
so many times 
Taking back my heart 
in gratitude 

Shattered 
In a million pieces 
With only myself 
Left to pick up 
What's left 

It was then 
the pain ended, 
wasted years 
for what

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 11:57:00 PM
    All the emotion a man possessed buried beneath stone/i try to climb ..Ouch this is painful..It is...And some pain only time can heal.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/10/2013 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    TIME IS ALWAYS THE GREAT COMMANDER IN OUR LIFE HAPPINESS IS THE GOAL THANK YOU DEARLY CHARMAINE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:26:00 PM
    I can relate to this very deep, emotional poem. You expressed your feelings of pain, so well. Great piece of writing!...You might like my new poem, "Photograph"...By the way, I replied to all of your comments yesterday, I don't know if you noticed! Sorry, I couldn't reply sooner....Thank you for all of the kind comments!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you most beautiful comment deeply appreciated