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waterworks

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waterworks

look into
the eyes
cries within 
the soul
as feelings abort
drops of emotions
as hurt falls down
the child inside

vunerable and weak
in a collection
of the many faces
from years gone bye
upon the face of love
was the one
who cried

suffering weakness
soft feelings
a heart 
blue cold
with aching screams
falling dark
black curtains
inside when
love died

in clouded vision
a chill wind
blows upon the face
in a deep cold breeze
rippling shivers
to the bone

silently waterfalls
downwards raindrops
crystal dropping explode
bursting inner house reflection
heart rotting
inside hurt

shining out inner pain
housed in deep chambers
the house of pain
suffering engineered
waterworks
controlled leaks

emotions fractured
heart's forsaken face
cold in the eyes
bitterly cries
then weeps
bitter sweet lemon
arid taste
tasteless 
heartbreak
love

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  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:04:00 AM
    Quite you went through all the emotions in this one Liam, quite an intense piece.. I enjoyed it :)

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WILMA THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:25:00 AM
    Sweet, sour...such is love whether we like it or not. Intense work here.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ALMOST SOUNDS FOOD LIKE THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Another good one thanks for sharing

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME DEEPLY APPRECIATED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Maybe we could mix the other ingredients of life such as honey to lemon and make the best yummy muffin cake of happiness ever.Heartwrenching...but beautiful.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/10/2013 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THAT SOUNDS YUMMY HAHA THANK YOU FOR THE SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:28:00 AM
    You have a passion for words and poetry Liam, when you get lemons you make the sweetness lemonade, all you need is a little sugar my sweets, that's all,love to you always, Vienna xxx

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OH A SWEETNER I THANK YOU DEEPLY VIENNA VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED