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Below is the poem entitled heart breaking ice which was written by poet liam mcdaid. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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heart breaking ice

lets break the ice
melting sitting
upon the knee
standing tall
love the tower
of strength

with unity of mind
could hear 
a thousand voices
singing this moment
handing over
a token

undying love
scarlet red
holding in the hands
a crimson delight

from the deepest
red dripping raw
opening in the chest
a treasure 
freshly bloomed

mine heart
within you 
a rose
i give 
you my all

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:24:00 AM
    Deep, honest, strong lines. There was much strength in your vulnerable stanzas. Very nicely done!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 2:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 7:09:00 AM
    This rose smells beautifully Liam..

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU CHARMAINE IN PETAL SOFTNESS APPRECIATED HEARTFELT
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:03:00 AM
    What a way to break the ice , liam! I am impressed by this new poem of yours. Thanks for your kindness; your visit was greatly appreciated. Always, Laura

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    kindness is in the beautiful comment i received i thank you deeply greatly appreciated