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You're my Star

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You're my Star

hey there,
You have lighted up my world..
Now you're the one I am dreaming of
Dont you know,
I can sit here forever,
Just looking into your eyes?
The things I see there
Always take me by surprise
but I don't see you coming...
I see you standing there;
so close but still barely out of reach;
I want to be closer to you,
so I'm on my way...
I will be missing you
I will be missing the places we used to know..
wish i could carry you with me
I hope I make you a little happy too
I am not saying goodbye
I know I'll see you again
I would be crying in that strange city
and you wouldnt be there..
but I will carry on..


6.22.11 (my goodbye poem before I boarded the plane)

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:51:00 PM
    - A very sweet poem, Jeinara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Odonio Avatar Jeinara Odonio
    Date: 9/10/2013 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks =)
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Lovely write!!!

    Odonio Avatar Jeinara Odonio
    Date: 9/10/2013 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks =)
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poem tonight, departures are always difficult, hugs and safe trip xxx

    Odonio Avatar Jeinara Odonio
    Date: 9/10/2013 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks =)