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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 6:09:00 PM

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 9/9/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Liam, thanks for the comment bud. A real golden oldie this one is. By rights this should have been different, but i followed the flow of the music. The music didn't say fight or hate to me. It said Love and sadness to me. What do i know. Catch you laer Liam. Your friend, MIKE. Catch you upside down probably.
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Hey Mike, a well crafted narrative that depicts a captivating story,, Regards, Ken

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 9/8/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Ken, Hope you are doing well.This was written when i was at the high school. We'd written a piece of music about Culloden and it came across quite sad. We all had to write a poem about the music. This wasn't the piece used. I always remembered it so i thought i'd throw it in my pot. Thanks for dropping by Ken. Your friend, MIKE.