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The Ordinary

Father always ready for a brawl
Altercation continues
Mom can't tolerate Sis. at all
Sister hates me and talk to me very little.

In the playground
Friends are always being gay and sportive about my family!
Sometimes make me wound
Few don't know nothing but fight happily

I can dissolve among them
And easily flowing
I can never fit me at home
Mom waits to beat me and Sis for enjoying!

I feel bore at home and alone...
At night before bed i can saw the tenderness,
Can hear the drops from dry bone
Hug of vanity and kisses turn out my sleepless



Litan Dey
You're a little kid again
A boy of 3 years old

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Litan This is a sad and emotionally heartfelt write. The reader can feel the pain and sorrow that's in this little boys heart. Nice job thank you for the congratulations and nice comment on my Soldier poem.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:45:00 PM
    This is a really sad little life for a three year old boy. Gosh, I sure hope it is not based on how your childhood really was!!

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/9/2013 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes you are right....it's not mine.But i saw many family like this and some of them were my friends.In my childhood also i face some of what written here.Thank you for your nice comments on my works....Have a good day.
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:51:00 AM
    wow Litan, i like your style, different and well versed. a sad view from the toddler and the life he bares ... love love..Linda

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/8/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your smooth visit .....Have sweet dreams!!!love love....Litan
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:08:00 AM
    It's interesting to think about our childhood and how it shaped us. You have the opportunity to try to change what family life you have as an adult. If you have relationships with children, I know you will make their lives much happier and break the chain that you have described here. This is one of the greatest challenges of our lives. My dad was very competitive. Always beat me at everything. Not a lot of tenderness. Fortunately, I have been able to be different.

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow!congratulation for your great job to your family.You absolutely right here....Thank you.