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Impatience

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Impatience

I know somewhere, away from here Somewhere deep on different shores Our stars are meant to cross again I know of love............I know I feel your presence here with me It matters not the century A tangled vine was sent for me To cling, until my eyes can see you reaching out for me There is a tangled vine, that grows between Two centuries old, it can't be seen Between us now, it has a hold that defies all lucid reasoning
___________________________________________________ Submitted for Dr. Ram's Contest "Passion Pays, Not Patience"

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  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:48:00 AM
    A true poem of passion. Congratulations on your HM

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 1:00:00 AM
    Congratulations ....Seren

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:43:00 PM
    So passionate! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:43:00 PM
    nice poem of passion...Linda

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Congratulations Carrie on the H M..'

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:02:00 AM
    another fin write from your gifted pen...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Carrie enjoyed reading congrats on honorable mention Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 7:24:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in my contest, Carrie. The entry was for any form except the free verse.

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    Date: 9/21/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops.......my oversight! Thank you for the HM, however! :) Carrie
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:59:00 PM
    this reminds me of those shows about people who time travel back to their loved one. Romantic one for his contest. ME LIKES.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:23:00 PM
    Thanks for the entry

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:42:00 PM
    This is a wonderfully written entry for the contest Carrie. I am sure to see it in the winner's circle. It is so good to be back here reading poetry again. I have missed so many outstanding poems. I had an operation on my eyes and had to keep away from the computer until they healed.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Creative contest entry...Reads like winners list to me..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Lovely, Carrie...You are a true poetess with finesse! :) Good luck on contest, my dear...LOVE your avatar..Always that beautiful smile....