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rediscovered

In the ashes 
of pain 
The hurt of you 
Tears flowing down 
In the walls 
of my heart 
Ache washed pain 

Washing away 
the heartache 
Rain clouds 
upon the night sky 
In howling wind 
they keep falling 
You put the dagger 
to my heart 
Straight through 

You tore 
my life asunder 
My heart in you 
shut down 
Putting me in hell 
The love 
of you died 

Within my soul 
My heart reborn 
Like the phoenix 
Out of its ashes 
You shine 
Like a burning flame 

Love will shine 
A fairytale path 
Like a sprinkling 
of dust 
Wishing from love afar 

In the clouds 
a light shines 
You are 
my candle 
In the wind

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  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Candle in the wind..I love this kind of ending to such a deep powerful poem..Reminds me of one of my faviurite singers Elton john and beautiful queen of hearts ..Princess Di...Outstanding verses.Thanks for reading my humble posts..always appreciated..Goodnight

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I WOULDNT MISS THEM FOR THE WORLD I WHISPER TO YOU NITE HAVE A BEAUTIFUL ONE SEE YOU TOMORROW SWEET DREAMS
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Beautifully written, Liam... There is always light after the darkness, if we keep looking for it....Wonderful work!....You might like my new poem, "Tears In Heaven"....Thank you for the sweet comments on my poetry. It really means so much to me!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Hey Liam buddy, May that candle forever burn for you my friend.. Regards, Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    KEN THANK YOU DEEPLY MY FRIEND HEARTFELT APPRECIATED OLD FRIEND
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THE PLEASURE LIES IN YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEEPLY