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The Clock

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The Clock

                     *Clock runs
              we are watching them
        making fun with its slow move
   you made for move not to awake us
i know we are more lazy but not like you!
   You don't have senses and emotional faces
       we slept but make others run
                 It's your race...
                    "Clock runs",*

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Litan Dey
Just Nine Lines
06/09/2013

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  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:20:00 AM
    some days I wish there was a way to slow that clock down, yet other days I want to speed it up....I am not familiar with this form but like the shape this poem has as well as the words within...nice write! L) hugs

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 11/4/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My view about clock also same as you...Here try to make fun,lol!But can't...Thanks
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Time--gotta love it. How it controls so much.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 11:12:00 PM
    cute take on the theme. Now I need to go back and put visual two on MY poem!!! geez, I thought I remembered everything to do!!

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/8/2013 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha Ha....thank you for your visit.I am waiting for your visual2....
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 3:41:00 PM
    Litan, sometimes I feel the clock running and giving me time to move and wake.. Love the meter. Good luck in the contest.. xox~ Linda

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey
    Date: 9/7/2013 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Here i tried to represent some lazy personality....Thank you