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Chick a dee dee dee

Chick-a-dee-dee-dee
    Chirped with the greatest glee.
    So happy upon that tree.
    More of you now I see,
    a quick count gives me three.
Chick-a-dee-dee-dee
    So small yet so free.
    Flying from here to the sea.
    Oh how nice it would be,
    to leave this spot and flee.
Chick-a-dee-dee-dee
    Take me away I plea.
    If only you could carry me,
    to fly away on a spree,
    where I can relax on a coastal scree.
Chick-a-dee-dee-dee
    Watching the waves I foresee,
    finding comfort around a shade tree,
    as thee.
    Would you agree?
Chick-a-dee-dee-dee
    Only request that I’d decree. 
    Is that we bring my lovely.
    For without she,
    I will never be free!

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:47:00 PM
    The craft of the poem in mono rhymes makes it a nice song

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth
    Date: 9/6/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Never thought of that, hmm. I'm not very musical due to a complete lack of rhythm and timing.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Great job with monorhyme..Not so easy to do sometimes..Thanks for stopping by..Your visit to my poem page is uplifting..Sara

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth
    Date: 9/5/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara. Just kinda flowed out :) glad to stop by anytime.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 11:59:00 AM
    nice rhyme. I enjoyed your writ. Please read mine. Thanks. JM

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth
    Date: 9/6/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    glad you enjoyed Joseph. I'll take a look some time at your stuff.