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love is like 
drivin a car one 
should think 
afar how to 
smoke the 
engine change 
gears and hide 
fears drive 
calmly and 
smile warmly 
know the right 
direction and 
desired 
acceleration 
how to check 
mirror lanes 
and evade 
footlines the 
soul that knows 
this is granted 
a licence.

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:46:00 AM
    Beautiful write Hunter! I love how you've paralleled love to driving - you've brought out the theme very well and the closing about getting a license - superb. Very well penned!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:21:00 PM
    H Hunter, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:10:00 PM
    Hi Heart Hunter, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Hello Heart Hunter <------ alliteration :)thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Heart ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)