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Secluded Under the Lowlights

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Below is the poem entitled Secluded Under the Lowlights which was written by poet Yanny Widjanarko. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Secluded Under the Lowlights

Crowds, laughter, passer, loner 
Lost in a shade, abandoned in howler
The cage of intensity
Bribing all the tendencies

Talk to the wind blows
The dimension of silent shows
Glimmers are everywhere
But the existence stands to nowhere

Today is like the other day
Sleep upon a time and disclosed by the other way
Dream leads you to the dreams
Drugging you to the other schemes

If only it's not a dim

Like the empty frames hanging on a tree
The space depicted to be free
Taking the brush and painting the world
Heeding the verses and ready to twirl

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 2:51:00 AM
    You have lovely lines here, your opening line, and "Sleep upon a time..." for example. Well done.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/28/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Scott pleasure to have your visit :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Tell me more about what you are experiencing here. I feel like somehow your story or thoughts have not completed. Still I am treated with two poems, this brightens my day. Hugs Rick

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/5/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I look forward to reading what you come up with.
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 9/5/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are awesome, I also felt like this one is not completed too, but somehow the feelings is just stopped and clicked, I think I need more time for warming up, lol thanks for the add, I will fixed this soon and let you know :) have a lovely day hug yanny
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Very interesting and mystical. I got the feeling of wanting to be somewhere else, which is something I feel quite often :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 9/5/2013 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Karen, interesting perspective of yours :) for me this poem is like saying "too much for nothing" glad to see you in here today Karen have a lovely day there :) hug, yanny