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My Despair

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My Despair

I have lived a thousand years,
And I've never aged a day,
I have shed so many tears,
Watching loved ones pass away.

I have seen cities grow and change,
From London, England to Paris, France,
All my life I've had to rearrange,
As the years went by in advance.

I will never see another sunrise,
I've forgotten the sky of blue,
When shall I meet my demise,
Until then, I must continue.

I have taken lives of the innocent,
And I did it without a care,
No harm is what I had meant,
That is the cause of my despair.

I will taste the iron in your blood,
Dripping over my fangs, it shall flow,
Running down my throat like a flood,
But when, you will not know.

As the clock tower chimes eleven,
I'll be looking for my next victim,
I'll fly through the dark heavens,
Deciding, will it be her or him.


Written by : Kelly Deschler
Poems From The Vampire Contest

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  1. Date: 5/26/2014 3:23:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, An excellent piece with a great flow and rhyming. Showing us the despairing thoughts of the Vampire. The eternal Life Is not quite what we think It to be. Even the Vampire can get tired of living. How many walk Into the flame or the sun. An excellent write as always you place before us Kelly. Your pen seems to forever run gold. Long may It do so my friend. I have already read your poem, "Where The White Rose blooms, and I'm glad I re-read It. Excellent piece. I always thought so..MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/27/2014 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Mike, Thank you for the wonderful comments, as always.... I would not want eternal life, either. If I were a vampire, I would probably walk into the sun after enduring long centuries of loneliness.... Thank you also, for rereading "Where The White Rose Blooms". It is one of my best poems, so far, and it is the one that I am the most proud of. I'm happy that you enjoyed it, my friend!
  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:09:00 AM
    Superb poetry and your rhyming is just mind blowing.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/15/2014 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Mustapha. That really means a lot coming from such a talented poet and rhymer like yourself!
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:55:00 AM
    congratulations Kelly xx

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:19:00 PM
    Well done ! Love the rhyme and imagery. Ominous vampire tradgedy. Congrats :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Niiiiice Kelly!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 1:28:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, kelly

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:18:00 PM
    A chilling tale full of dread and portent. Congratulations.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/6/2013 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for the wonderful comment, Mark!
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 5:12:00 PM
    I think this is so well expressed, congratulations Kelly

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/7/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No thanks required, it was my pleasure to read.
    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/6/2013 10:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Richard!
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 11:26:00 PM
    Kelly Such an imaginative and interesting write. It is scary, creepy, descriptive, full of imagery and takes the reader on a voyage into this dark and intense world. Nice job

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Kelly, a fantastic write. You took me on a thrilling journey into the darkness of despair. Magnificent metaphor! Going to my faves :) Congrats on your well deserved win

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Kelly ,dearest. I've always loved your poignantly penned creations... I can honestly say your dark side is just as beautiful as your soft side... Congrats on your well deserved win..... Way to go, Girl. You know I love ya, doncha?.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, I liked this one as it hints at the dilemma of being immortal...Thanks for sharing and visiting my verse.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 6:16:00 AM
    - I looked into the past winners list .. where I found this .... a first place!! - Well deserved!! - CONGRATULATIONS,KELLY!! ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:19:00 AM
    Congrats on the first place win in the contest, Kelly

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your first rate win, with love and admiration xxx

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Well deserved #1 poem Kelly.....Congrats................. Love~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:40:00 PM
    congrats on win in epic contest Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:37:00 PM
    A unique subject for your epic......well done, Kelly! This was terrific!!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 3:25:00 PM
    wow...you have penned a masterpiece with this one....great poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Very personal style and hidden magic synthesize this beautiful poetic expression. Congrats on your win. :) G.

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