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Pans tights

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Pans tights

lost in a deep sea 
the frog is loose 
escaping from hell
tracking down
hopping mad
a culprit

named pork chops
who ate the pig
is on the loose again
vile threats 
made on duck

calling out to everyone
his lips 
on the lily trumpet
bringing back 
the magic
with those green 
smelly old tights

in hearing
whistling on the wind
under a silver moon
peter pan imposter
sweet talking candles
softly falling petals
on the hair 
magically green 
shades is back

the legend appears 
in the ocean
a white ship sails
carrying pan's tights
like mosses 
the sea will part

swallowing the ship
washing the remains ashore
along with tights
shipwrecked
on paradise

sweet smelling primroses
the rush is on 
for pans tights
journey begins
bring back the bacon
enchanting love 
in peter's tights


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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 12:30:00 AM

    This sounds like a treausure hunt for those tights..Very creative fantasy..Made me smile: )

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 10:19:00 AM

    Hi Liam, i like this, a magic verse, well done... deep, imagery on the 5th stanza.. always~ Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/3/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    there is a story behind it watch the characters emerge from out of the deep blue sea they all want the tights ha ha wonderful comment linda thank you deeply