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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:20:00 PM
    A very interesting poem, Stephen! I like your use of repetition. It made the feeling of desperation stand out. Good write. Love, Kim

    Kilmer Avatar Stephen Kilmer
    Date: 9/1/2013 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kim, I appreciate the comment and the read. Glad you liked the repetition I was hoping it would be effective in this situation. ~Kilmer