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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Good thought you chicken out, and left the soup. lol...just kidding. Thank you for liking my latest poem... gees it felt good to write something not CUTE... thanks for stopping by... Linda The Fan

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 6:49:00 AM
    Scribe, good morning. the sun is not out yet. .but already hitting the soup from my phone. . where is barbie? jk..

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:47:00 PM
    I esteem your briliant analogy of how we parent our own destruction Scribe - very smart write - don't forget the amygdala my friend - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Great metaphors Reminds me of one by Wislawa Zimborska that she wrote about Baby Hitler. Great imagination and chill factor a given. That's the thing about evil. It morphs from the seemingly benign. SuZ

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:33:00 PM
    talk about twisted & Dark ;) you got me thinking hard on the bastardized child line. Hey! *Demon exposes the anatomy of a Hermaphrodite, Self impregnating* got me thinking of Godzilla* why? sending soup mail. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 3:42:00 PM
    That was very interesting! Love the poem!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 10:29:00 AM
    as a parent I disagree... Oh! wait wrong poem. WINK!!! :-)

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 10:28:00 AM
    Good morning Scribe, of no such thing as evil...LOL... JK... hope your having a good Labor Day.... xxooxx... PD

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Wow!!!!!!! Excellent poem poet

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Doc, I agree with Pace about the metaphorical value of this piece -- the metaphors are astounding and so clever, I think some of them might have flown right over my Bungholio brain. Lil focker and medulla in the same poem....I am going to have to re-read this again, because you offered-up a puzzle for me. The frontal lobe hoisting the 'child' in the air, is a heavy lift for sure.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:26:00 AM
    A serious write fam...when I first opened the page my eyes caught a hold to the last line which gave me chills. A metaphorical genius!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Hello Scribe, when all is said and done it is love that keeps the new born evil under wraps for a tad bit. Well that's what mom use to say... LOL :-) I like the imagery of one so vain pampering the disguise of a newborn. It shows that all evil is really for the best :-) I'm glad this was not a demanding challenge on religious faith. Well done ending, some explanations of the evil disease has been overlooked. I am with you on this write ~~~~well done. always~ LINDA