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Finding your path

Tom Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Finding your path which was written by poet Tom Larrow. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Finding your path

listen with your eyes
save your thoughts and remember
patience descends if you wait

giving all respect 
true joy is found in giving
and you will be respected

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  1. Date: 9/19/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Good comments here Tom, hope you and all yours are well; Joe..)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:55:00 PM
    good advise Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Congrats Tom, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:04:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:05:00 PM
    What did your eyes hear? What does patience look like? smell like taste like, move toward .. showing. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 9/7/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very good points, next time better. Thank you. Anata no kenkyona gakusei kara
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Well done, congratulations.

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 9/7/2013 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Congrats on the win

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 9/7/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yasashi-sa no kotoba wa, watashi no sensei arigato - Thank you for reading
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Good morning Tom, a wonderful and smooth win. gentle for the readers. ..luv. linda

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 9/7/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Uchi to soto de utsukushi josei to shijin ni kansha - Thank you for reading
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:10:00 PM
    you gotta love those Asian ways. So respectful. Congrats for the HM.

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 9/7/2013 2:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    doumo arigatou gozaimashita - thank you for reading
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Congrats on your unique winning work..Sara

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 9/7/2013 2:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    doumo arigatou gozaimashita - thank you for reading
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Please give ponce over to fourth line for less syllable if it is for the contest

    Larrow Avatar Tom Larrow
    Date: 8/31/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I still saw 5 syllables but, a 2nd look made me rethink the wording. 5-7-7 5-7-7 is that correct for sedoka ?