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Below is the poem entitled You which was written by poet Karla Deal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You

I never thought that I would 
Fall in love with such an incredible man as you
You fill my every day with warm sunshine
God must have known that eventually you'd be mine

You make me melt inside with your gentle kisses
And your loving embrace
When I'm in your arms, it's always a comforting place

You are always there to wipe a tear from my soft green eyes
Baby, I know you never like to see me cry
And I hope that you will never, ever tell me "good-bye"

So, just to let you know
I quietly say a prayer each night when I'm in our bed
"God, please let our love be forever strong"
And you climb into bed next to me, holding me tight
"Baby, you say. I love you deeply and everything is going to be alright"

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 11:50:00 AM
    words of a love so strong and true. A feeling of togetherness and devotion is written in each line. good job

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 9/20/2013 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robin. Ummmm...do I know you? I went to H.S. with a friend with exactly the same name as yours. We actually graduated the same year-1982. Are you the same Robin Davis from Kimball HS in Dallas?
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:15:00 PM
    cute love poem. very sincere and honest. full of emotion and joy. nice job

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 9/19/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read one of my poems. And thank you for your sweet comment as well. Karla~