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As Day Breaks

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As Day Breaks

As day breaks, tie dyed Cobalt Blue and pink dance~swirl
Arm in arm twirl to nature's symphony, as crickets sing
The sky above the horizon one giant pearl
Warm moist cotton candy pirouette like last of spring

As waning blue moon waits for your return cool fall
Its blueness gone much later comes again a harvest moon 
When fall's crops have been laid to rest in barns so tall
Then a new crop comes in, your blueness upon full fields is strewn 

Finis'

A twist on Poulter's Measure
12, 14 with rhyme scheme ABAB
The scheme is suppose to be couplets when it is 12,14
I have been thinking about definitions of Blue Moon
Totally confused now...


"Blue Moon as third full moon of four in a season. The Maine Farmer’s Almanac defined a Blue Moon as an extra full moon that occurred in a season. One season – winter, spring, fall, summer – typically has three full moons. If a season has four full moons, then the third full moon may be called a Blue Moon." Copied from article on the internet..

A Blue Moon by this definition was  August of this  year 2013..

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:23:00 PM
    Beautiful scenery of the Nature adorned with sweet color imagination, my sweet friend. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:48:00 PM
    Well done Sara.. this one really 'Blue' me away..'

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:03:00 PM
    Beautiful. I am waiting.. :) G.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Hi Sara, A lovely write..I often walk down our beaches and enjoy the colors of the horizon at sunset.. Ken..

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Nice so far Sara. I await eagerly for the rest of your submission.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:04:00 PM
    and the beat goes on, sara.. waiting for the whole piece soon... :) hugggs

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:44:00 PM
    it's a great start.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 9:59:00 AM
    it works beautifully - hope you finish it soon

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:22:00 AM
    This is a beautiful beginning of a write my friend! I look forward to reading the finished version, especially since it will be similar to what has already been written! Beautifully done!!