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  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:32:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 10:23:00 AM
    It's almost that time again. This is a wonderful poem. There was a daytime show a long time ago called - Dark shadows. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 6:43:00 AM
    The ending was witty, I wasn't expecting that. Overall I love it Gail. Big hugs for this.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 1:20:00 PM
    I seen the title and thought it must be about Barnabas ;},,, but it was more along the lines of Goosebumps series or Scooby Doo ;} cute story ,,,did you ever see my Grim Reaper or Myth and Monsters ? Thank you for liking my DAWN verse ;} hugs

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 10:23:00 AM
    I like that fun element of surprise you put at the end. Russell should love this one, Gail.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 10:07:00 AM
    wow, I love your spooky poems, Gail - hope there'll be an angel versus devil poem coming up : )

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:31:00 PM
    What an interesting poem about Halloween. Good Luck

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:19:00 PM
    "I want my Mommy!" LOL Gail, this is a great write, my dear! Chilling as all poems about Halloween should be! Big hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 5:15:00 PM
    I loved this very suspenseful poem! Perfect for reading on a dark, foggy, and cold Halloween night. Very nicely done! And, thank you for your kind comments, once again!

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:52:00 PM
    I loved this very creepy poem about Halloween, very enjoyable, thanks Gail....Peter

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:30:00 PM
    YES!!! I love Halloween, and your lovely creepy dark scary writes my friend! Your poem here is full of fright, and fear is enveloped all within it! I absolutely loved reading this tremendous piece this evening! Yes, may the shadows be with you all throughout this time up through Halloween! I love your All Hallows Eve poetry Gail, you never fail to impress me! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Awesome, awesome!!! I like Halloween because a countdown (in my own head) clicks towards Thanksgiving (my favorite holiday). I truly enjoyed what you did here, once again!!! This would be a fun campfire story. =D

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Scary..If for a contest, should be in the winners' list..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..I think that comment was the fastest one that I have ever received almost instanteous...Sara