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Together

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Together

I cannot wait any longer for you
My desire flows like a raging flood
Allow me to do what I want to do

My passion is the color of my blood.
Coursing through every part of my body
My desire flows like a raging flood 

Together as one we are meant to be
Passion ignites within me like a flame 
Coursing through every part of my body

Lost in waves of rapture you feel no shame
Rolling together on blankets of joy
Passion ignites within you like a flame

Use me in every way I am your toy
The time for waiting is now in the past
Rolling together on blankets of joy

The peak rising we are here at last
The time for waiting is now in the past
I cannot wait any longer for you
Allow me to do what I want to do

Passion pays not patience contest


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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:15:00 PM

    Cool! Tough form, you pulled it off beautifully. Congrats!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Nancy
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 9:54:00 PM

    sensual and passionate. Wonderful poem =)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Thomas
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Very passionate indeed,Richard. What a great poem for the contest. Congrats for your win.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea.
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 2:04:00 PM

    congradulations. let me do what i want to do!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks John but I don't know you well enough. Sooru I couldn't resist *lol*
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:24:00 AM

    I'm so so proud of you, Richard...I LOVE THIS PIECE. Of course, it is a Terzanelle....Love seeing your name in the winning spot! :) :) :) Passionate and full of anticipation

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 7:39:00 AM

    Big congrats Richard! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 12:39:00 AM

    Wow Richard, passion plus....congrats ...Seren

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/23/2013 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Seren.
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:39:00 PM

    well done on the passionate write...PD

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2013 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Congratulations, Richard, you did the prompt justice.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2013 9:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Reason
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2013 9:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:11:00 PM

    Very passionate and warm Richard, a big congrats on your 1st place win xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2013 9:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rose.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Good to read your winning entry here Richard (well done) Joe..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/22/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joe
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Wow.......this is filled with such longing! Good for you, Richard....just what he wanted for the contest!! Congrats!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/21/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Becca Congratulations to you as well!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/21/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carrie.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place win for this very passionate write, Richard !!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:33:00 AM

    I knew this was a great poem when I first read it......congrats on your well deserved first place win....what a beauty of a poem :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/21/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sandra
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Richard congrats on a fantastic win with this superb write congrats Shadow x smile

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/21/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks shadow it was a pleasant surprise.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 7:05:00 AM

    Congratulations for the first place win, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/21/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am so honored Dr. Ram.
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:50:00 AM

    Amazing, passionate, sensual write. You just raised the bar on the contest.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Very passionate Richard..it reminds me of one of my passionate poems. If u get time to read my " can I sleep with you " .. Cheers !

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 10:56:00 PM

    This one doesn't belong in any contest, it stands out all by itself, this one is brilliant !!!

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:52:00 AM

    ohh, unbridled yet somehow restrained, rich... what a combination... :) huggs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Nette.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:08:00 PM

    Thanks for the entry

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Dr.Ram
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:37:00 PM

    Ahhhhhhhhhh.....the terzanelle!!!! :) Beautiful...captivating...sensual...Just one thing, if I may? Allow...still connotes patience, Richard.That raging flood in the line before could be "forcing", "pushing", "compelling" you to do what you want to do...OR..."I'm bound to do what I want to do"...But you're a gentleman...that explains your word usage! :) Very sensual and moving...You will do well....You always do! :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ahhhhhh......I see! Lovely amazing write, RIchard....So passionate
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I chose allow because it is a battle between patience and passion and in the end passion wins the night.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Awesome job with this theme, Rick !

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Becca.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:56:00 PM

    You described extremely well how desire over rules patience....love this passionate write! Hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2013 7:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cecilia
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Much luck in the contest, Mr. West Coast Man! Great write as usual my fellow Canucky!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2013 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack! I hope you have a spectacular weekend.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:23:00 PM

    I truly like this Richard, good luck in contest...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2013 6:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, I appreciate the comment.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Great piece Richard. I loved it from the start till the very end.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2013 6:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mustapha.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:27:00 AM

    wow...you can feel the passion in this piece and see that patience is losing out, well done Richard! Good luck in the contest!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2013 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What is life without passion? Thanks for commenting Sandra.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:41:00 AM

    Yes sir! This was bold & bleeding with vulnerability. Spectacular.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/29/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Drake.