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To not care

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To not care

How could one 
In signature 
of note 
Drawn upon 
the breath, 
in a beating heart 

Gasping ,
sword pierced 
Breathing I cared, 
half closed eyelids 
Hurt deep inside 

In the wounded sigh 
Did not cost you 
A second thought, 
tears in fractured pain 
Wounded deep 

It would be nice 
If even 
it meant something 
To care 
just a little 
In the answer no, 
tearing the insides 
Out of me 

Within the heart 
Death of you 
Weeping emotions 
I cared

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  1. Date: 9/11/2013 2:26:00 AM
    You misted my eyes Liam..If everyone in life cared as he should have there ll be no more tears.You rouchec me with your siciere verse

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    Date: 9/11/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AHH CHARMAINE THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THERE WILL ALWAYS BE TEARS OF SADNESS UNFORTUNATELY THANKS DEEPLY APPRECIATED