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Below is the poem entitled MUSE which was written by poet Eileen Ghali. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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MUSE

M ystical union:  his thoughts flow into mine
U nderstanding life: how water turns to wine
S exual tension: inner thoughts he lays bare
E lectrical charges: he sets off the flare


For Andrea's Four Letter Contest
28 August, 2013

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:59:00 PM

    congratulations Eileen,... xox..PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:54:00 PM

    Wow sweetie....awesome....congratulations... understanding life....wish someone would fill me in....great win.....

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Eileen, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:03:00 PM

    Eileen, congrats on your win with this sultry acrostic! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:29:00 PM

    he and you blend well together...congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:53:00 PM

    very nicely done, and methinks your muse is a human!! Mine is a woman who just lives in my mind! I especially loved the line on "wine!" Gorgeous, and congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 5:13:00 PM

    Great write my little Desert Orchid, you have mused well. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/29/2013 11:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks, Richard...Sweet of you to visit and post. Hope it does well, but there are so many great writes out there. At least the challenge was fun!
    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal Date: 8/29/2013 5:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and good luck in the contest
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 6:41:00 PM

    and the flare turns into fire and is an amazing poem!! :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/29/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Carrie! Sweet of you! :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 12:22:00 PM

    Now that is what I call a muse! Can we clone him? LOL Awesome acrostic! Hugs

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 12:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wouldn't that be awesome! :) Hugs!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:04:00 AM

    Flame on!!! Nice! =D "Union", "Understanding", "Tension", "Electric"...damn right! There is no better way to live. Excellent acrostic!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) DRAKE!!!!!! Please...post a new poem! I want a challenge! Thanks for the support and encouragement!!! Hugs
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 6:58:00 AM

    You have quite the imagination, well done.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thank you kindly!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:38:00 AM

    This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I love how you brought many aspects of what a muse can be, that was very ingenious on your part, and you left a lot to our imagination too, awesome! What a brilliant piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes....usually muses have some sort of pull on us that goes beyond the platonic...I mean, read about painters and authors, and poets...there was this close intimacy with the muse that was beyond mere friendship. Anyway...glad you liked this write, Russell. Lovely post, and thanks for dropping by.
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 12:41:00 AM

    goodnight Eileen, I'm off to bed again, stopping by to wish you luck, and leave smiles for all the muses we have in our hearts and the soup.... luv luv...linda

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 12:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) What a sweet endearing post! Yes...muses are wonderful! HUGS! :)