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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:26:00 AM

    Awww what sweet words for your wee treasure! I am so impressed with your writing my good friend! Cheers!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 11/2/2013 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh Mr. Ellison, I do appreciate you stopping by. she is my little treasure and I don't want to give her away, but this is the dilemma that every parent faces...that why you cradle each day and give them away slowly....Thank you sir! MC
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 8:11:00 AM

    Such beautiful words. Time is of the essence. Goes by so fast. God bless u and make it home safe to ur baby girl.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 11/2/2013 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks I will, we are nearly done. And thank you for commenting, I'm grateful for your admiration of my work. MC
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Now this one pulls the heartstrings tight!!!!!...she'll always treasure this...:-)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 11/2/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really hope so Donna, I really hope so, thank you -you are too kind! MC
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:52:00 PM

    Wonderful!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 11/2/2013 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very appreciative of your kind words, thank you my friend! MC
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 10:43:00 AM

    That was gorgeous

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 11/2/2013 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Denise! I'm so glad you like it and stopped by! Come on back anytime!!! MC
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:13:00 PM

    What a beautiful piece MC , I have not been able to catch up with all these amazing poems .. Thank-you my Brave Poet friend , Serving in Afghanistan.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 10/22/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Shanity -LOL!!! I'm sure you will in time. No thanks needed for serving, but I appreciated it and....psst...I'm not that brave...:) MC
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:12:00 AM

    I understand your sentiments..Each step a child takes is a hard one for parents that is when it comes to going out in the world on their own..Thanks for your visits..Your comments were uplifting..I hope that your stay in a foreign land will not be much longer and that you have a safe return to see the daughter of whom you speak..Sara

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 10/22/2013 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    As always Sara, thank you for your warm words. We're nearly done out here, so my return is drawing close! MC
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:27:00 PM

    That parental grip loosening over time, brilliant poem Marquis, deep honesty was felt. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Might find some you like. Peace.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 10/22/2013 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks my man, I'll stop by soon!! MC
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:50:00 AM

    "Beautiful words..great poem"

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 10/22/2013 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, you are too kind. I appreciate you stopping by!!! MC
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:51:00 AM

    Such sweet words spoken here about a fathers love for his daughter ~~~endearing

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 10/22/2013 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Madelin, I really appreciate your kind words here! MC
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:50:00 PM

    An amazing write to your daughter!!!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/9/2013 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks man, I really appreciate that!!! MC
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Such a sweet write. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/9/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kim, I appreciate your kind words for my work. MC
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 8:25:00 AM

    aw, I see you've added a dedication line before the poem, that's really awesome. She'll cherish this so much, MC.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I did, hope so Becca -I hope so! Thanks for stopping back in! MC
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 12:22:00 AM

    This is a very beautiful poem showing father & daughter great love my dear friend, MC. I love it so much & so enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing & your inspiring comments on my poem with the congratulatory comments as well. Thank you thank you so much. Have a nice weekend! love and hugs, Leonora

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and don't mention it -I need to get back there to read some more of your work! Thanks!!! MC
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 10:13:00 AM

    This is a beautiful write MC; thanks for sharing your heart with us ;)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Wilma, you're sweet. Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed it! MC
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 6:40:00 AM

    So true Marquis, this one strikes a chord. I am sure most parents will relate.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes I believe so, thanks for stopping in as always Rick!!! MC
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Such beauty and truth , I like this very much and identify , it is hard letting go of your children that grow .

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is very hard, you're absolutely right! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one Yvette! MC
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:22:00 PM

    Very heart warming poem Marquis, xxx

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mystic, glad you liked it! MC
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:17:00 PM

    Very good poem you have here MC! I love it, sometimes it is hard to see and imagine our loved ones grow up, that is why we must cherish every second with them! Great poem!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Absolutely right Chris, I'm so glad you stopped in and I appreciate your comment! MC
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Read with much setiments and every loving daddieswish. You right time has no treaty with mortals. Well said.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 9/3/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks John, your commentary is always appreciated my friend, thanks again!!! MC
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 1:11:00 PM

    Hi M.C. this is very touching, so many can relate. I honestly love seeing relationships between father/ daughter....& your poem makes it that much more lovable & yes the hardest thing is letting go, giving room to fly , learn & grow....blessings my friend. <3 Cherie

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 8/28/2013 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Cherie, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! MC
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:17:00 AM

    So so sweet my good friend! Nothing like father/daughter love!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 8/28/2013 1:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are right sir! Thanks an awful lot for your comment Jack!!! MC
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:12:00 PM

    HARDEST THING IS TO LOSE ONES LOVE... SOOOO....TRUE... MC...

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 8/28/2013 3:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    For a father to watch his little girl grow up to a woman, knowing he like every parent will have to give her away -tough! But I have time, so "I'm cradling each day" Brother! Thanks Man!!! MC
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:28:00 PM

    hmmm... this one is a little more difficult to grasp but I sense it has a very deep meaning for you... something sad, or bittersweet. Another beautiful write .

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/27/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thought I knew, from the line "he cradles each day" .... love this so much.
    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Date: 8/27/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ahhh, I disguised it from you, that's okay I sent you Soupmail. Thanks for reading and commenting though -i always appreciate your visits!!! MC