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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 1:48:00 PM
    Oooo, Yes loves this one again. Savoring such a moment... Making it intense.. Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:58:00 PM
    ha ha this one hits the word the way it should be.. look out.. love it.. congrats..Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:29:00 PM
    Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading your work that has such great flow..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Wow Yasmin....this is an incredible write! Beautiful words decribing what the eyes say. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Yasmin, congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:58:00 PM
    Yasmin, congrats on your win with this creatively worded acrostic! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Beautiful Yasmin..beautiful. congratulations

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:18:00 PM
    stopping by again to say congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:49:00 PM
    some great words used in this poem. I really like your acrostic, yasmin. BIG congrats in my contest.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:14:00 AM
    Hi Yasmin, Lovely acrostic that caught my eye.. Ken

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 1:51:00 AM
    - Really good work, Yasmin - You are proficient in all different poetry forms-Hope your day will be fine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Now this is a perfect Acrostic, I believe this is the first place poem right here! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem here this evening! You have shown the best way to write an Acrostic poem my friend! What a supreme piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 7:34:00 PM
    great have expressed this one very well...great write! hugs

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:37:00 PM
    Very good write you have here Yasmin! Beautiful and full of emotions that I crave when I come onto Poetrysoup to read others poems, and you have that beauty and emotion that I crave. Very beautiful poem Yasmin!!! Just like you! Love and hugs and kisses all around for you Yasmin, keep up with the great writes you possess. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Very prfound in its expressions. Good imagery and flow! Enjoyed reading you again. I'm back for a bit and thought I would see what you've been up to lately.... :) Lucinda

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  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:46:00 AM
    An amazing how you described the senses of your eyes. Beautifully written...I also love the french as well. Awesome, awesome, awesome. .. :) GL in the contest.