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I want it its mine - passion over patience contest

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I want it its mine - passion over patience contest



Walking past the art shop
A picture she espied
The price was way far too high
I want it, its mine.

Knew her patience was limited
To wait for any time
For this lovely  possession
I want it, its mine

Then she remembered him
An old flame, mega rich
I wonder if I enchant him 
Will he succumb to my wish

I want it, its mine
Kept running  through her mind
As passionate love evoked time
I will have it, will be mine.

So patience over passion
It doesn't have a chance
With people with no emotion
Who leads life a merry dance

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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 11:32:00 PM
    so true, Seren. Many people, however, just can't seem to wait for anything Congrats and glad I finally saw this one.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Well done, I really like this one. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:42:00 PM
    well done Seren...PD

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Congratulations Seren, on the honourary mention.'

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:14:00 AM
    This caught my eye......a different twist you took, I love that your passion was over something to buy !! Good job !!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha Ha Carrie, I just cant think as i am supposed to, always look for a quirky side....Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:00:00 AM
    I think your poem is very well crafted, worthy of a win for sure...congrats :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sandra, you make it sound so good ....Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:02:00 AM
    this I think is fantastic Seren super write congrats on being placed Shadow x smile

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Shadow, i always seem to think differently to others .Must be cos i am Welsh hahaha...Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in my contest, Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for H.M. ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 7:10:00 PM
    I hope you will post this poem for my contest,

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 11:39:00 AM
    Patience is a virtue that I've never had much of lol. Nice poem, like to see you having fun with these.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/27/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Wayland ... glad you stopped by ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Wonderful piece-- so many truths and comparatives in one. Your title reminds me of when my children were around two-- some of the first words they learnt.. "I want it-- it is mine !!"-- before the 'sharing' stage of childhood development :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/27/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Kim ....many thanks ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:55:00 AM
    This is a tremendous write my friend! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant and glorious piece here Seren, such a illustrious poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/2/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Russell glad you liked it ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 5:38:00 AM
    Lovely poem. The story has many kernels of truth.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/27/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hello Monterey . hmmmm you think so...Seren
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 1:15:00 AM
    Lrarnt from this good poece. Nice!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/27/2013 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    glad u did Onyedika ...Seren